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Subliminal Sublime

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Cracked open mouth
Turns into a stuttering smile
When you're around.

(striking my nerves,
my dialect is convulsing
to formulate direct
kind of phrases.
i can feel words
coming out as
booming silhouettes
upon my face.)

I've attracted the sound
Burning in me mildly;
Pronounced: I love you.
I tried not to be cliche. Did it work?
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freerangepenguin's avatar
Not cliche in the least. Nicely done. :)