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decided to make a title poem out of my own titles! haha! i was bored...

[ariel] was on [the doorstep]
[flooding the cradle]
& [pacific] said, [seasons
don't change]

[spitting out bodies]
of [seabirds]
[down the rabbit hole]
& [she] [don't breathe] 
              ^^ changed to didn't
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cality Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I really like this! Having 'Ariel' at the beginning instantly grabbed my attention because I recently bought Ariel and loved it, hehe. 

Anyway, this is a very neatly done title poem. :love:
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ssensory Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much! I thought it was an interesting experiment to do, but became dissatisfied with its result. But I'm glad you enjoy it. :heart:
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cality Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! :)
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014   General Artist
such brilliance :icongrinstareplz:
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ssensory Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Student Writer
aww, thanks. :heart:
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brokengod--veins Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I didn't even know this was a title poem until I read the artist's description :O

(dude, it's been a while. Got hitched already?)
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ssensory Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Student Writer
Nice. XDD 

(it has!! nope not yet lol still underage but we plan on it mid-twenties or early thirties)
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brokengod--veins Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Underaged? How old are you both?
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ssensory Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Student Writer
16 and 17.
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brokengod--veins Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
seems a bit too young to be thinking about marriage-but hey love's beautiful! Is it that Sidore chick in your fb?
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